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I did this today on Microsoft processor and I didn't know how to upload from processor so I printed and took a picture it's just a rough draft. Please comment saying what I could improve on.

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Looks good and basic. Could use some punctuation corrections.

Well, there's a "C" in scenario. Also, I think the "elite" part might send the wrong message. Same goes for the Confederate Flag. You should just use our circle logo.

Avenger wrote:Well, there's a "C" in scenario. Also, I think the "elite" part might send the wrong message. Same goes for the Confederate Flag. You should just use our circle logo.

fixed scenario I'll change the elite thing and consider changing the AOSC logo to the circle one thanks

jrleonard wrote:Looks good and basic. Could use some punctuation corrections.

Put in punctuation

Avenger wrote:Well, there's a "C" in scenario. Also, I think the "elite" part might send the wrong message. Same goes for the Confederate Flag. You should just use our circle logo.

fixed scenario, I took out elite and put in only and considering changing the AOSC logo to the circle one. thanks

Wording is a bit... odd? How about something like "Come and join us at one of our many upcoming games at a field near you"

yes thank you

The AOSC isn't the only airsoft group in South Carolina, and we're an organization (not association). You could say I'm arguing semantics, but it bears mentioning.

I will change that also do you know how to put a publisher file on here?

sweet. i'm going to post these up at my AA meetings

AA?

Let me google that for you. http://bit.ly/HJJVpD

any more suggestions

We still aren't an association, otherwise it's pretty awesome, if colorless.

I would probably not use "woodsball" as a game type... It's pretty clearly derived from paint-"ball"

and only because I can forsee it, "Woodsoft" is no bueno tambien.

maybe "Outdoor Games" .. idk.